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Watching You - Bennett/Critic fic for emeriin

GarlicIsTheAnswer
Title: Watching You
Rating: R
Word Count: 917 (aprox.)
Pairings, Characters: Nu!Critic/Bennett the Sage
Warnings: spanking, voyeurism, exhibitionism, degrading talk.
Disclaimer: I own nothing, mean no disrespect, etc.
Summary: Critic is a brat through the whole review, so Bennett decides to punish him. Bennett’s plan backfires a bit.
A/N: For emeriin who deserves much more than this little fic. There’s plenty more fics with your name on them, waiting in the future, I promise! Happy birthday!



The review was over, and Critic wasn’t leaving. Which was … fine. Kind of nice, actually, considering he’d entered the room and started screaming and panicking. It had taken a while, but Bennett had finally proven to Critic that he wasn’t the Devil, or whatever.

Critic was hardly a saint, however. In fact, he was kind of being a … well, there was no other word for it, he was being a brat. He’d been rude throughout the review, making fun of the movie in mean-spirited ways and insulting Bennett at every turn. Sure, he’d always been a bit of a jerk, but during the big anniversary crossovers he’d seemed to have grown a bit. Hell, he’d sacrificed himself for the entire world during that time they went into space!

What had happened to him?

“Why would you make me watch something so awful?” Critic whined, again.

Bennett’s frustration had, by this point, reached almost unbearable heights. He wasn’t going to snap and turn into the Devil, he wasn’t going to do anything nasty. But he did want to teach Critic a lesson.

“Ok, that’s enough!” Bennett growled, grabbing Critic and pushing him over the arm of the couch.

Critic flailed and struggled and yelped “Oh god, please, no! Don’t! Um … get thee behind me, Satan!”

“I am not Satan!” Bennett roared, pinning Critic down. “Would you quit it already?”

“No, I won’t! I’m not gonna make this any easier for you!” Critic tried to kick backwards and failed.

“I’m not gonna do anything besides spank you.” Bennett promised.

Critic froze. “What?”

“For being such a brat. I think you need to learn a little lesson, Critic. And I’m going to teach it to you.” Keeping one hand between Critic’s shoulder blades, Bennett drew his other hand back and landed the first blow.

Critic squeaked and shuddered, but he didn’t try to shake Bennett off anymore.

Interesting. Bennett spanked Critic in rapid succession, and while Critic made several indignant noises, he didn’t try to make it stop. On the contrary, he stretched out his arms and gripped the couch to steady himself. Bennett didn’t need to keep a hand on Critic’s back anymore, so he used both of his hands to spank Critic, varying the strikes in rhythm and intensity.

“You are such,” Bennett struck Critic particularly strongly, “a rude,” he used his left hand for two quick, lighter strikes, almost pats really, “ungrateful,” he let his hand linger a little, “brat.” His next three strikes brought tears to Critic’s eyes. “What is your deal? I don’t get it, I really don’t.” Bennett stopped, panting, leaning over Critic.

Critic twisted his hips slightly, rubbing his ass against Bennett’s crotch. Bennett jolted backwards and took a few steps away.

Critic craned his neck. “What, that’s it?” he pouted, actually pouted.

“Yeah, that’s it.” Bennett crossed his arms. “What, you want some more?”

“I think you know what I want.” Critic grinned, waggling his ass in a suggestive way.

Bennett rolled his eyes. “Yeah right. That was supposed to be a punishment. I’m not rewarding you for bad behavior.”

“Awwww, come on! I took my punishment well, right?” Critic turned around, leaning on the couch and pouting.

Bennett felt the back of his neck heating up and shook himself. “I should be heading out.”

“Ok,” Critic splayed out on the couch, lower lip sticking out petulantly. “I’ll just … take care of this then.” He unzipped his jeans and started stroking himself, keeping his eyes on Bennett the whole time.

“Jesus!” Bennett took a step back. He couldn’t look away, he was so shocked. Worse, a part of him didn’t want to look away. It was shameless, what Critic was doing, but it was also oddly sexy. Critic was daring him to up the stakes … or attempting to embarrass him in retaliation for the whole spanking thing.

Critic moaned, shifting on the couch into a more comfortable position. He kept staring at Bennett.

“Are you … getting off on this?” Bennett asked quietly. “Me, watching you?”

“Yeah,” Critic gulped. “Yeah, I … I like this.”

Bennett considered his options, weighed his libido against his conscious, and sat down in a chair across from the couch.

Critic beamed and started making increasingly obscene noises. He quickened his pace, too.

“Look at you,” Bennett drawled, smirking a bit. “So greedy. Shameless.”

“Mmmmm, yeah …” Critic nodded, eyes already a little unfocused. “Tell me more.”

Bennett wracked his brains. “Putting on a show for anyone willing to give you attention. Would you do this for a fan if they paid you enough?”

“You know I would …” Critic groans, his left hand reaching up to run fingers through his hair.

“Whore,” Bennett said it easily, noting the blush that it brought to Critic’s face. “I mean it. You oughta be in a window somewhere, flashing your ass at passers by.”

Critic came, whimpering as he collapsed down onto the cushions.

The moment froze in time. Bennett, trying to figure out what to say or do; Critic panting on the couch, spent.

Finally, Bennett stood up and cracked his neck. “I should really be going.”

“Really?” Critic looked up from the couch in disappointment.

“Yeah, really,” Bennett grabbed his suitcase and headed for the door.

“Thanks for the movie!” Critic called after him.

Bennett stopped, one hand on the doorknob. “… you’re welcome. See you later, Critic.”

Critic made a mumbled noise of agreement.

Bennett sighed, and left the hotel room.

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emeriin
Nov. 11th, 2013 04:59 am (UTC)
Ahhh, that's nice, and you even made reboot!Critic likable in his bratdom. Thank y'darling.
ladydiskette
Nov. 11th, 2013 03:52 pm (UTC)
Nice fic, and I have a feeling Bennet may have liked it a little too much more than just "Oh Critic needs to be punished." it feels like ;) lol *wink* XD

He just didn't want to admit it.

He was so enjoying it on different levels..don't lie Sage ;) lol

But in all seriousness it was a good fic and it's always a treat seeing more stories from you lately. :)

Edited at 2013-11-11 04:05 pm (UTC)
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